IC PW Grading

[Sandy]

Here.

[Manda]

Gallarus - Brown Tribe

This probably sounds like a damn broken record but I guess we all like to hear ourselves fucking talk. Gallarus has FIVE (5) alumni playing compared to TWO (2) on the other tribe so it is highly disappointing that somehow you don't follow the one damn rule. The tribe flags are sexy as hell so why you wouldn't use it is truly beyond me. The alumni should know how imperitive it is to follow the damn rules!

I do appreciate that you have supplies for food, a fire and a pot to cook. I appreciate your reasoning for having the donkeys since I was initially questioning why you chose donkeys - aka they have purpose. Now wtf is going on with the random tree you say that is for shelter but it is on the island across the way?? Or the lovely boat that is not even close to a realistic item in a real survivor game. Sure you deserve to have fun - a hand built raft or something would of made more sense.

Overall - No tribe flag hurts you bad but you have reasoning for all of your items, food to eat, a pot to cleanse your water and wood to keep your fire burning.

7/10


Tuath - Purple Tribe

I am happy you have one chicken for food but that isn't going to last you long. And if you have a Tai on your tribe then you might not kill "Constance." Little morbid naming the chicken after one of the prior players - but it is what it is. Also, I appreciate you sticking to the culture of the Blasket Islands by adding in the sheep but what is their purpose?

You have a fire but nothing to keep it going and nothing to cook with? I really think its awesome you have the Ireland flag as part of the roof of your shelter. You have a more realistic boat for the theme of survivor.

Overall - The tribe flag and Ireland flag are awesome. However, the sheep have no purpose, you have no way to feed yourself or make water so you don't get sick (too much Naked and Afraid watching and seeing people get sick from drinking bad water).

6/10

[noteanoshade17]

Gallarus:
Honestly, your camp is not very unique. You can apply this camp to the vast majority of iSurv1vor locations, or anywhere. Put iSurv1vor in Antarctica and little would need to change. Yes, you included a couple of animals and a sack of potatoes, but not very overwhelming. You had a choice of camps, so an attempt at things specific to your camp would be nice. And the, what I am guessing you are using as a flag. I am not calling it that myself because, it isn't. It's nice, don't get me wrong, BUT IT IS NOT A FLAG. Also, that four leaf clover is awful. However, I would say graphically, it is better produced. The builders did well with what they had. But what you had wasn't the best.

Tuath:

Yours seems like it would fit more at Gallarus' setting, if you had the ruins I would give a higher score. Now, I know you didn't pick your venue, but work with what you have and ultimately, you didn't get to choose because you lost the duel. However, while I didn't like it all with your actual setting, I think it fits in well with the overall theme of the Blasket Islands. You also included your flag, which is definitely a plus. The Irish flag shelter, while not feasible in actual Survivor, was a nice touch.



Scores:
Gallarus: 4 - Would have been a 6 if you had your actual flag, a 7 if your write up also didn't suck in comparison to your opponents.
Tuath: 8 - Your write up took it up a mark, really good job

[patiaroy13]

Gallarus Tribe: First question. Where is your tribe flag? The name of the tribe is on your picture but that is all. Your items look somewhat organized but i personally think there should be more. The shelter is small and not big enough at all. The clover is just placed in the grass and looks way out of place. I dont get it. I like the clover but i wish yall would have put it in a different spot. Those donkeys omg they look soooo random. The boats also. I would imagine on a survivor island you wouldnt see freaking yachts and stuff. Yall should have used like a canoe or something. It does look nice and neat but yall had time to do more and it doesnt look like that much effort was put into the challenge. Overall i think yall could have done more but it was an okay job done.

Score: 5/10




Túath Tribe : Good Job on using your flag. I believe you used the right type of boat for survivor. Lets talk about that fire. I dont like how everything look realistic but the fire looks like clip art. That is the biggest problem I have. The sheep are huge you could ride those instead of the boat because they are so huge. I wish more things would have been used. There was plenty of time to add more to the picture but i guess less is more sometimes. I like the write up it was really well written. So props to that. That one little chicken.... now how are yall gonna all eat on the one little chicken. Over all i think yall did a pretty decent job. 

Score: 7/10

[woods]

The Gallarus Tribe

The first thing that caught my eye was the missing tribe flag. The directions looked pretty clear that the flag had to be included, so that was a big turn off for me. You had the tribe name on the wood but it looked awkward. You mention that your torches are lit by the fire, yet there is only one torch in the picture. I was like wow! Who tried to sabotage the rice when I saw the rice on the ground. The potatoes are just hanging out too, even though you said you had baskets to put the food in. It took me a minute to find the boat because I was looking for a survivor style boat, that you would see in an immunity challenge. Not a Jeff Probst taking the votes to Los Angeles style boat; a little much. I was confused on the shelter; you keep using the word tent but it looked like wood with cargo netting or leaves against it. I would have just called it shelter for lack of better wording; shelter for 1 or 2 possibly 3? Also, I think you should have left the bagpipe part out as I don't think anyone would have said, "Man, I wish they had some bagpipes in this picture" but now that you mentioned it, I'm like wow, that would be kind of cool. And isn't your tribe color not green? 

Score: 4 


Túath Tribe

First impression... this looks like a survivor camp. I felt the survivor vibe from this camp site. I like the team flag being there but not being the dominate item. I also like the two little flags next to it. Just felt a good vibe from that. I like that you did your research and made the connection to your tribe ( #TeacherProblems ) but I don't think you needed to mention the reward part and what it could be. Just like Gallarus and torches v.s. torch, we have chickens v.s. chicken over here. I would have included more chickens and less oversized sheep. Just my opinion. I don't really know if you can use an item for unity and food at the same time. Someone is going to be attached to billy the sheep and you are going to want to kill him because you are hungry and well, there goes your unity. I think the Ireland flag as a nice touch but a little cliche... but it works in this picture! I do fancy your boat over Gallarus' boat though, as it is more survivor-like. I also like how you describe what each person did for this picture to show team work and tribe unity. 

Score: 8

[wrong4life]

Gallarua : first off I liked that your guys added things that are native to Ireland ( the donkeys. Four leaf clover, the potatoes) but donkeys are really hard to see. They are too far in the background. I do like the sign with the team name but I wish y'all added the tribe flag. That's a main thing at survivor camps. The other camp supplies are just laid out in the grass which is basic. But they are all there. The spear is kinda out of place. I also liked the Shelter. It's a good size without taking up too much of the picture. I just feel like there is too much blank space. Adding some of the supplies to the bottom right would have helped with that. It's overall good. I thought the write up was the best part.

7/10

Tuath: I'm glad you guys added the tribe flag but I wished it was a little bigger. I know still your guys have the beach picture you only really have the sand area to work with. So I can't be mad that it feels empty. I liked that you added facts are Ireland that related to your tribe members. But the write up was lacking. Your shelter is too small. And the flag seems out of place. Are you even allowed to use flags as tarps? Overall it's fine but boring.

5/10

[whitx]

Gallarus Tribe

I really love so many elements of your camp but seriously can't get pass the fact you didn't add your tribe flag I mean that was one basic requirement for this challenge..... Anyways I loved the write up and think you guys did a great job gathering items for your camp I really appreciate the donkeys and the tools, I don't think you utilized the space as much as you could have but overall not a bad job at all.

6/10

Tuath Tribe

First off while I'm glad to see you have added your flag I feel like it's to far away and not being showcased as much as it should be though. I read the sheep were for food purposes but I don't feel like they make much sense though and there literally the main focus of your camp. Somethings I do really like are the boat you added to your camp and the shelter. I wish you guys had put forth a little more effort though into both the camp and the write up

7/10